March 2007

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Book Review: Childhood’s End by Arthur C. Clarke

First things first, I need to make a note about my reviews. A lot of discussion has been made over my review of Tower of Shadows by Drew Bowling, much of which is disagreement. I have nothing against a disagreement, but I do find it interesting that many automatically think I must be wrong in my assertion that TOS is not really that good of a book simply because they liked it. This isn’t to say that I don’t want comments and disagreement in the future, but I want everyone to realize one thing: these are based on my opinions. If I don’t like a book, then I don’t like it. There’s no going around that for me. I will explain the reasons why I don’t like it, and leave it to everyone else to decide. I’m not the end all / be all on this subject. This is simply my opinion. Take my thoughts however you like, just take notice that just because you like a book doesn’t mean that I should like it. We all have different tastes.Now to the review. Most of us who read SF have read works by Clarke or have at least heard about him. He is, after all, one of the most popular ‘golden age’ SF authors. So, by saying this I want it to be clear that Childhood’s End is a classic. It was written in a time when SF had practically no foothold whatsoever in the mainstream market. Like Foundation by Isaac Asimov, Childhood’s End was written in installments and published in magazines. I didn’t know this when I first started reading it, but now that I do know this it makes some of my dislikes for the book less pronounced. I have to now take into account that rather than a full fledged novel, this book is more like a set of connected short stories all set in the same universe on the same plotline.The synopsis is this:Set in a not so distant future (at least when it was written) an alien race known as the Overlords comes to Earth in giant ships (think Independence Day, only not violent). They establish themselves as overseers of Mankind, ridding the world of war, famine, prejudice, racism, etc. All this is done without violence. The Overlords could easily wipe out Mankind, but that is not their goal. They are there to establish a long lasting peace, a veritable utopia where none go hungry and everyone can live a life of leisure.But something else is going on, something that Mankind is not prepared for and could very well make them extinct… That synopsis is somewhat vague simply because I cannot give anything at all away or it would ruin the ending of the book. I can tell you this, you will have one of two reactions to the end: you’ll either feel sad and sympathetic, or you will be angry.Now, stylistically speaking Clarke is a very good writer–one of the best really when you think about it. He is able to draw you into the characters deep enough to care about them even though you know them for such a short time (remember, written in short story installments).The only thing I didn’t like about the book was the ending. To me it seemed far too sudden and I can’t imagine reacting in the way the characters did to the final twist. This isn’t to say that the ending is unbelievable, although scientifically speaking from a more modern view it does seem tremendously unlikely, but it is saying that the ending seemed somewhat out of place. Many in my lit class discussed this same subject. Some liked the ending, others didn’t. I personally didn’t much care for the ending.Regardless, this is a classic. A must read. If you are into the foundations of SF, as I am, then you should probably pick this one up, along with Foundation by Isaac Asimov and early works by Poul Anderson and the like. For a classic it is good; but from a modern prospective it lacks due to various circumstances. Still, I’m glad I read it.

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Critique Groups…part one…

I’ve always loved critique groups. After all, without them many writers would likely never have been published. Think of Tolkien and the Inklings. Would Tolkien have published The Hobbit and ultimately The Lord of the Rings? You could argue that he would have without being part of the Inklings, but then you could also argue that the friendships he developed with those men and those in groups he was a part of before compelled him to write LOTR.I’m also a fan of online critique groups. Critique Circle has one of the best crit systems I have ever seen. They have several forms, but I am quite fond of the “In-line” form, which allows you to click on each paragraph that you want to comment on to make commments, and when you send the critique the author sees those comments below said paragraphs. It makes online critting so easy because you can actually do something constructive without a lot of clicking and fiddling. Let’s face it, critiquing via MS Word or whatever program you use is no easy picnic, even with that handy highlight feature–and honestly I haven’t a clue how to highlight and don’t intend to learn.There are a lot of other critique groups out there, obviously, some free, some not. There is Critters Writers’ Workshop, which I found to be rather interesting as it puts its focus in SF/F/H work–seeing how the former vice president of SFWA–Science Fiction & Fantasy Writer’s of America, Inc.–runs it. I personally cannot say whether Critters is any good as I am not a part of it. I am a part of Critique Circle, and would definitely recommend that. If anyone is a part of Critters, please leave a comment. Tell us what it’s like to be a part of it.And what about all your critique groups out there? Or do you not have one? Granted, sites like Critters or Critique Circle aren’t really critique groups in the traditional sense. Unless you develop a relationship with certain individuals on there you’ll likely only receive comments from the same person on rare occasion. But, you do tend to get valuable feedback nonetheless. Here are some things I’ve learned about being involved in face to face, online, and other (the other being some critiques I received from editors on short story submissions): 1. Remember that any feedback you give should be constructive. Never bat down a writer by telling them their work is dreadfully horrible and that they will never amount to anything. There are only two outcomes in that situation: the writer will be severely hurt, hate you, and maybe stop writing altogether or flame you unmercifully or cease to be a good constructive critter for you, or they will break away from you entirely and end up being published while you’re not. You don’t want either of those. Well, that’s not entirely true. The idea behind critique groups is to help each other become published, but still, nobody likes a ‘revenge publishing’.2. Don’t do anything to the writers work that they didn’t ask for. If they don’t want red pen, or they don’t want you to judge the grammar, then don’t. Unless the writing is so abysmally bad that you can’t help but make a few grammatical changes then don’t do anything at all. Actually, if the writing is so bad that you can’t help yourself then maybe that person needs to pick up Strunk & White’s book The Elements of Style, a sort of mini-Bible for any writer. And suggesting taking some basic english classes at a community college would help…3. Make yourself as clear as possible. Don’t say something that is so vague. Saying “something about this felt wrong” doesn’t give the writer anything to go on. What was wrong about it? Did it seem grammatically weak, or what? I’ve given my fair share of vague comments, and I try my best not to give them. It’s hard, I know. But you have to be strong my young padawan’s. Strong…4. You don’t know everything. Even if you think you do, you don’t. Sorry, plain and simple. Not even the most successful writers know everything. It’s best to be humble. Sure, give your opinion, thoughts, etc., but don’t pretend like you know it all. This is especially bad when someone who has not been published yet tries to give you worldly advice on getting published. Anyone else see a problem with such advice? I’m sure I’ve learned some other things, but I can’t quite put my finger on them right now. For a later post of course. The same goes for much of the other things I wanted to discuss on such groups. So, next week or later there will be a part two. Anything you might have learned?

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Writer: 3, Fate: 2

First things first, the really good news!I just received news that I have been accepted into UC Irvine (University of California). I’ve not accepted the admission yet–waiting on UC Santa Cruz and UC Davis first–but it is good news to know that they have accepted me into their English program at Irvine as it relieves a lot of pressure of whether or not I will get into any university at all. Now, I’m in. Plain and simple. If I don’t get into any of the others, well, oh well, I can transfer to Irvine–although when I think about it there aren’t many reasons why I wouldn’t go to Irvine in the first place. Irvine has a decent creative writing program, it’s not in Sacramento (can’t stand Sac…worst city in the world…), and it’s in L.A. (which is a good and a bad…good because there’s lots to do there, bad because L.A. is a horrible city). But anyway, on to my other stuff!Alright, I’m keeping a tally now on this whole writer/fate battle. Any time I set out to do something, whether it be hunting down a new book in local stores, or whatever, and I fail, fate gets a point. But if I succeed, well, I get a point. So right now I’m apparently winning! So goals for this weekend? I became rather curious by an idea presented by Rebecca from Of Making Many Books. She’s decided to read and review the entire ALA’s Best Books For Young Adults 2007 list. And so I set out trying to find a decent list someplace of SF/F works so I could do the same thing, but at the same time I didn’t want a list as long as the one she is doing (76 books). I ended up having to come up with my own list simply because there wasn’t one that really fit what I was looking for out there (although I found an awesome list of recommended fantasy authors list here). As such, starting at some near point after the Philip K. Dick Award winners are announced I will begin reading in order of losers to winner all the novels nominated. I will be doing the same with the Nebula Award’s and also the Andre Norton Award for Young Adult Science Fiction & Fantasy both found here. I wanted to do the Nebula and Hugo’s, but the official ballot for the Hugo’s won’t be announced for a while. Since the awards mentioned have not been announced, here is the list as of right now in no particular order: 1. From the Files of the Time Rangers by Richard Bowes2. The Girl in the Glass by Jeffrey Ford3. The Privilege of the Sword by Ellen Kushner4. To Crush the Moon by Wil McCarthy5. Farthing by Jo Walton6. Devilish by Maureen Johnson7. Magic or Madness by Justine Larbalesteir8. Life As We Know It by Susan Beth Pfeffer9. The King of Attolia by Megan Whalen Turner10. Midnighters Book #2 by Scott Westerfeld (I will read book #1 first of course)11. Peeps by Scott Westerfeld (he got two nominations for the same award…)12. War Surf by M. M. Buckner (previous winner of the Philip K. Dick award).13. Recursion by Tony Ballantyne14. Living Next Door to the God of Love by Justina Robson15. Mindscape by Andrea Hairston16. Carnival by Elizabeth Bear17. Spin Control by Chris Moriarty (I will read Spin State first of course)18. Catalyst by Nina Kiriki Hoffman19. Idolon by Mark Budz That’s the list! Over the next few months I’ll be gathering all those books up so I can read them and present my reviews. Now if someone can just magically tell me how to acquire some advanced reading copies of books so I can feel special in reading certain author’s works early that would be great. So, one point for me on making this list! Now, obviously I’ve quite a bit of books to pay for. Thanks to the IRS I got my tax refund back. It’s only about $350 since the IRS likes to screw me just like everyone else out of my hard earned dollars by spending it on things like blowing people up and arguing over whether or not Public Schools should include religious sermons as required classes instead of teaching the “THEORY” of Evolution (stress on THEORY, not fully proven, but scientific nonetheless…gravity is a theory too by the way…). So I’ve used a little to buy some of the books and some others at the local thrift store. Why do I love thrift stores? How can you go wrong with buying a bunch of books by old and new authors for 25-50 cents a pop…I mean really…so good. So this is where it gets tricky. I managed to get a good chunk of the books I wanted from the list, but at the same time over half the books weren’t even in Borders! I went to the Thrift Store before making the list, so my binge there is unrelated (and I spend about 10 bucks at the Thrift Store for about 150 dollars worth of books…). So, one point for the writer in successfully scoring some deals, but a lovely point for fate for screwing me out of some of the books I needed :(. I’ll post the list for another post, otherwise this one will end up beyond long, and my chapters for WISB are long enough on here and I haven’t a clue how to do that little thing on Blogger so that posts have a ‘read more’ tab so you can have more posts on your page without dragging the scroll bar down 500 miles. Now, for the second point that fate earned. I realize I had fate at -2 a while ago; that was simply a joke. Redchurch over at Quantum Storytelling was talking about these notebooks by a company called Moleskine on this post. Apparently he discovered them at his local Bed, Bath, & Beyond on a huge discount.So, I decided,

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Book Review: Venus by Ben Bova

If there is one thing that I have come to expect of Ben Bova it is that he can take any fantastically unbelievable idea and make it so real that you actually think that it could happen. This is the case with Venus.Van Humphries is the last living son of Martin Humphries, having outlived his brother who died a few years before on a trek to the venusian surface to try to discover how a runaway greenhouse could explain the sudden warming on Earth. But his father hates him beyond reason. He’s the runt in the family with a terrible anemia that he has to take medicine for to keep in check. Then comes his father’s award–a billion dollars to anyone who can bring back the remains of his beloved son. To make matters more interesting, Martin Humphries has cut off all of Van’s funding and in desperation Van signs up to win that billion dollars. But Van isn’t the only one that wants the prize…Enter Fuchs, an asteroid belt entrepreneur who lost everything he owned because of Martin Humphries, including his wife. Claiming a billion dollars could right his life and give him the vengeance he has always wanted.The story is riveting to say the least. I think this book is possibly better than Mars, but it’s such a close match I find it hard to make the decision. Everything from the way Bova designs the ships that take them to Venus and ultimately the ships that get them to the surface to his description of Venus in such a realistic manner made this book one of the best reads I’ve had in a while. I don’t want to give anything away, but the way he describes Venus’ clouds, surface, winds, etc. really give you the image of how dangerous this planet is.Venus is written in first person and I found that in this case it worked perfectly. I’ve known a few instances when I hated first person, but again, the same as with Old Man’s War, it worked very well here. Bova’s style is not profound in any sense of the word, and he likely won’t be winning any ‘best writer ever’ awards, but he has such a way to tell a scifi story to make you really believe in what is going on. There is little that I had to dispel belief for. This is something I’ve come to know Bova for–realism. There are a lot of twists and turns that you don’t expect too, and I won’t give any of them away simply because that would ruin the book. Pick this book up. You can probably find it online for cheap–it’s been out for a while. It is a fascinating read.

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Unfinished Business

I started going through all my document folders yesterday in search of a story I had written but never finished years ago that I thought would do well to get my attention for a while. I think it’s a good novella or long short or whatever you want to call it. Well, in that process I stumbled upon all of my other unfinished works, and there are a lot of them. I think endings are extremely difficult for me for some reason; obviously that is the case. Does anyone else have such issues with endings? In any case I decided I’d list some of the stories here with titles and brief descriptions of what I remember them to be about. It’s interesting to see all the different ideas I’ve come up with over the years! It’s also interesting to see what stories I’ve yet to finish. I’m sure some of these will be finished and edited in the future (in particular: Soul For Sale, Artemis, and Europa Strain). Soul For Sale: This is actually a story I’ve finished, thankfully. It’s one of my favorites that I’m working on getting published. Deals with a humanoid robot and his attempt to acquire the ‘soul’ of a doctor. “Soul” is basically a metaphor for someone’s life. It’s sort of a robots way to become more human and for other people to acquire prestige. Artemis: Another that I’ve finished. It takes place in the distant future of Earth after a cataclysmic war forces humanity to make a haven out of space colonies. Artemis is a school colony for kids. Atlas, the main character, struggles to survive as her former friend turns on her and attempts to destroy her through manipulation and the like. It’s a rather good story I think. Europa Strain: This one is not yet finished unfortunately. I wrote it after reading about the missions planned for the moon Europa. This story is set in the relatively near future when research drones discover a super virus in the iced over oceans of Europa and a small crew of men become infected and have to find a cure before the virus infects everyone on Earth. A Tear For Humanity: My first and only SF publication. It was published in a college literary journal and now that I look back I realize how weak it really is. The story is about a boy on his birthday who survives an alien attack in the L.A. area. One bomb, ten million dead. Psychosis: A WW2 story about a man who loses his mind after being left behind in France. This is sort of a psychological horror/paranormal story. It’s impossible to get published because it’s not easy to sell…it’s very dark. They Call Him Benefactor: I don’t remember where this story was going, but I opens in a giant gladiator style arena in the future…and the main character is pitted against big ugly aliens… YA Something: The title of this is just what the document is titled. I never gave it a title, but it is the predecessor to WISB. This story also dealt with going to other worlds, only in this case it involved far too many main characters and too many HP references. I’ll likely do something with it at some point in the future though–lots of editing to come. Revival of the Ancients: My earliest attempt at a novel. It’s far from being finished. I liked some of the story–mostly the plotline dealing with the character Arc and his wife Relena…and the old far Daval the dying wizard–but unfortunately there was far too much going on. This is why WISB has stuck exclusively thus far to one single viewpoint. There will likely be a break away later, but as of now I don’t need it. Down the Spiral: Fantasy at its very cliche-est. It needs editing and some nifty place to send it to really. Where the hell do you send slightly comical, yet unoriginal fantasy? That’s why it’s comical, because it takes elements from everything and makes sure to be cliche…the plot is a dwarf, an elf, a knight, and a wizard who go to find a magical scepter in a serpent’s lair to save their kingdom… Hate: In my Star Wars obsessed days I loved stories involving evil dictator types that could crush you head with a thought…so really that is all that this story is about and it isn’t close to being one percent complete lol. Still, I love the name Lord Achirune… Hello James: I don’t write mainstream fiction very often. In fact, I’m relatively bored by mainstream. I just makes me sleep. This story is finished, just not edited. It’s told through the eyes of a friend who copes with her best friends’ attempts to commit suicide. IDSTOR: Document title. I liked the idea of this one. What if you had to register to breed and had to meet a lot of requirements both mentally and physically? Now imagine you are a midget (or little person) who wants one… New Story: Document title. A space pilot is abducted during an interstellar battle, but can’t remember a thing. He finds himself forced to remember to provide information for mankind to better fight the alien threat. Think Fire in the Sky, only more forward… Skylark: Another novel attempt. I loved the magic system in this. It revolved around hair, so naturally women were better magicians because they naturally grow hair faster. When you used magic, your hair burned away, so magic is sparing. But if you use magic and have no hair to burn, you die. Also had flying ships even though it’s a very fantasy setting. Loved the idea. If Vampires Could Be Depressed: Think about it. What if? They consume all sorts of blood, so what if they were capable of getting depression too? I wrote it as a sort of humorous story of vampires and how the epidemic of depression affects them. Humans deal with it far

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