June 2007

World in the Satin Bag

Chapter Nineteen: Of Goodbye and the Summering Rocks

(Note:  This is not official version and may be removed in the near future.  This do not reflect what is read in the podcast version, nor any other version you may encounter.  I have preserved the rough form for posterity — or something like that.  This novel has since been rewritten.) James woke early the following morning. His mind raced with thoughts of the past day as he slowly took in his surroundings. Here the bright sunlight could be seen for the trees opened up like welcoming arms to the blue sky. The fire had been put out and he quickly found that he was not the only one that had awoken. Pea and Darl were nearby arguing over something he couldn’t see. They spoke in whispers, but he could tell from the tone in Darl’s voice that the two were on the verge of insulting each other. He stood up and let the covers fall from his body. He yawned and stretched. The scent of his un-bathed body wafted over him and he cringed. He sorely missed having a daily shower. It had been days since his last shower—far too long for his liking. Deep down he wished he could go back to Arnur and the great pool of little cleaning beings. The feeling of being one hundred percent clean of all dirt and grime seemed only a dull memory now. James walked over to Pea and Darl, listening closely as he went. “What if it’s poisoned?” Darl said, his whisper strong and nearly loud enough to be at normal speech. “Why would they poison us with one of their own among us?” Pea said. “Why not? False sense of security!” “Ridiculous.” “Plausible.” Then James was next to them. They looked at him; he looked down and found the object of their argument. Four baskets weaved of leaves and filled with berries of all shapes, colors, and sizes, and other fruits that both looked familiar and unfamiliar at the same time, lay next to the dead fire. There were fruits he knew—bananas, apples, pears, and even kiwis. He marveled at the sight of it. Even in Arlin City he had not seen such a brilliant array of fruits. “It was left overnight,” Darl said to him. “Oh?” James mumbled. “Forest folk of some sort. Maybe the Moss People left it. Maybe Brownies.” “Darl thinks it’s a trap,” Pea said. “Why would the Moss People poison us?” Darl grimaced. “Rumors and legends are generally born out of some sort of reality.” “You honestly think the Moss People would be behind this?” Pea’s voice rose to just above a whisper. “Or the Brownies.” “Preposterous.” Then Darl and Pea were arguing fully again and James tuned them both out. He stared down at the four baskets. Saliva built in his mouth. It all looked delicious, like a perfectly prepared array of the best pickings possible. Would they really poison us, he thought. Why? We’ve done nothing to them. Just then Tum Tum walked between his legs, yawning and stumbling side to side. The Brownie was not yet fully awake. As Tum Tum reached the baskets Pea and Darl ceased their whispered arguing to watch. Then the little man grabbed an apple, turned with drooping eyes, took a bite, and walked back through James’ legs and to where Tiddle lay fast asleep. The three of them watched intently. Suddenly Tum Tum heaved and began to choke. His eyes went wide; he coughed and hacked, clutching at his throat, teetering this way and that. Then, just as abruptly as it had all started, Tum Tum stopped and looked at the apple in his hands. He threw it with all the might a little man could muster into the forest and cried out, “Bloody tricksters! That apple is still a day away from being ripe you filthy little…” Tum Tum caught himself, took a deep breath, and brushed himself off. “Humph.” Then he went back to his bed and fell asleep in an instant. James, Pea, and Darl stared in disbelief. Then James took a peach from one of the baskets and ate. Darl tried to protest, but it was too late. Wonderment came over him as the juices of the peach filled him. The peach was juicy, as all peaches should be, and brought every sensation of joy imaginable from the sense of taste. A little stream of juice dribbled down his chin; he wiped it away. Soon Darl and Pea joined in and they all ate together, reveling in the amazing array of choices. Several minutes later, or at least long enough for James to realize that the sun was now truly rising from the horizon and spilling light over everything, Tum Tum and Tiddle awoke and took off along the path. Nobody tried to stop them, though James could tell that Darl truly wanted to. Instead, the three packed everything up in a rush and quickly mounted their respective Blaersteeds. The steeds took off without a single command and in no time they were alongside Tum Tum and Tiddle, both of which had taken to singing and playing their fiddles. This time James did not listen. He instead allowed his mind to wander for he had had far too much of their singing the day before and already could feel a headache building above his eyes. He focused on the sky, the trees, bushes, and other plants both old and new to him. His eyes wandered from the dense black hairs of Mirdur’eth to the path before him that had suddenly stopped winding in an out of the forest that seemed impossible to traverse. The path was as close to straight as he could hope, only taking mild turns here and there. The path itself was clear of brush as if it suddenly was heavily traveled. He wondered if perhaps the Moss People or even the other Brownies, which he assumed there were, had some affect on the way the forest

World in the Satin Bag

Nebula and Andre Norton Awards Announced

As usual I am behind. But here they are. (Note: this means I can read just about anything except the actual winners from my previous lists at any point in time. I’m happy about that because I can bounce around and have some freedom :P. And yes I do intend to get a review up, but unfortunately Recursion is taking me a while to read. It’s decent enough though.) Best Novel (Nebula)Best Novella–Burn by James Patrick KellyBest Novelette–Two Hearts by Peter S. BeagleBest Short Story–Echo by Elizabeth HandBest Script–Howl’s Moving Castle by Hayao Miyazaki, Cindy Davis Hewitt, and Donald H. Hewitt Best Novel (Andre Norton)Congrats to the winners!

World in the Satin Bag

My Silly Mistake

I’m an just as prone to mistakes as everyone else. Why? Because I’m a human being and thus am not born with the almighty powers of God or a god or a demigod or some such infinitely perfect being that is incapable of being fallible.My silly mistake was this. During the entire course of writing WISB I have not once taken any notes on the world that I have been building. I’ve not written down extensive information about the characters, the cities, etc. Why is this important? Because I have so much information in the novel itself that it is actually getting a little difficult to keep track of it all. So I’ve started keeping a database of information using EverNote, a nifty little note taking program. I’m still far far far behind, but so be it. At least now I will be able to keep track of everything. It will all be written down neatly! In a strange way it will be like a personal wikipedia site! Except it’s not online, obviously. I am way behind though in regards to everything that has happened in my world. I’ve only just begun to brush the surface and I think once I finish the first novel I will take about a month off to do two things:1. Get everything written down in my EverNote file so that I have an amazing reference guide not only for myself but perhaps for my readers. We’re talking extensive stuff here beyond what is actually written. Yes, I’m a Tolkien wannabe, but I’ll be nice enough not to cloud all of you with mindless dribble in the actual story because, well, you won’t need it. My main focus in WISB is the characters and how they interact and develop in this fantastic and altogether unimaginably bizarre world.2. Prepare to write book two, which is tentatively being called “The Spellweaver of Dern”. I’m not sure why, but I thought of that title and long time ago and it just stuck. I think originally I had intended it to be some sort of offshoot series of WISB, but I liked the named “spellweaver” so much that I incorporated it into WISB and ultimately into this set of books (whether that be two or three in total). My goal is no more than three books right now. I don’t want to have some massive series that could potentially run into time problems. But, this is all for a later discussion. So, this is something that will be happening towards the end of summer, which would put me at about the one year mark for when I started WISB if I manage to get everything written by October. In theory I should have it all written and up on this site by August, assuming nothing horrendous goes wrong–you know, like my car explodes or something of that nature. This also assumes my family will give me the time to actually finish writing this novel without me having to explain why I need two weekends out of the month to sit down at my computer. Then again, my family is crazy and will never understand that aside from wanting to become an English teacher I also want to be a writer and doing so requires excessive amounts of time not only to read, but to write and practice the craft. This is why I started WISB in the first place–as an experiment. Fortunately, this experiment has been mildly successful from my viewpoint and therefore has been kept on for over half a year now.Anywho, I am rambling.More to come this weekend 😛

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