Shaun Duke

Shaun Duke is an aspiring writer, a reviewer, and an academic. He is currently an Assistant Professor of Digital Rhetoric and Writing at Bemidji State University. He received his PhD in English from the University of Florida and studies science fiction, postcolonialism, digital fan cultures, and digital rhetoric.

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Reader Help!

First, I apologize to anyone who may be a bit annoyed with the frequency of posts today. I’ve just had a lot of things to write about today, partly because I’m in a rut with other writing at the moment. So, I’m hoping to get some help from readers, or anyone really. I have a story called “Asher”. It’s under 4,000 words, it’s strictly science fiction, and it deals with artificial intelligence and virtual worlds from a social perspective (so soft SF). I had my girlfriend read it (she’s done crits for me before we were an item, so I trust her judgment) and she had some major issues with it and we disagreed. I think there is a possibility this is because she doesn’t read much SF to begin with and maybe this particular piece is very much an SF piece and one that wouldn’t do well for non SF audiences.Would anyone who considers themselves a decently versed reader of SF be willing to read this and give your thoughts? I want to see if what she said is the same said among those who this piece would probably be directed towards anyway. Any help would be great. Just leave comment or use my contact link on the side. Thanks so much. (Don’t click the read more, there isn’t any more after this)

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Update On Writing: The Lies of Venicia

A.K.A. The White     I’ve hit a snag. I’m at about 30,000 words, I have three POVs, and the story is moving right along. But I’m stuck. Why? Because I’ve hit a point in the story where I have two problems.     The first is in the POVs. There are three characters: Alan, Carl, and Eileen (to be short about it). Each has a very distinct plotline that intersects with the others in some way. I’ve done that on purpose because I want them to be connected even though they are going in very different directions, which ultimately are all related anyway. It’s complicated like that. Well I hit a point in the story where I realized that there wasn’t going to be anything remotely interesting happening for Carl or Eileen for several days (days in the story itself I mean). I have also just finished a large chapter about Alan, so I don’t want to delve into him again simply because it’s a lot to take in anyway. So, what do I do here? I could skip ahead in time, but then I run into a huge problem that I don’t want to deal with. The three characters are on the same time line, obviously, meaning that if I skip ahead for Carl and Eileen by a few days, I have to do the same for Alan, which means losing some important events for that character. An option is to add a fourth POV to the story that, while not nearly as important as the other three, still could add some depth to the story since the character I’m thinking of using is directly related to Alan anyway.     The problem with doing that? If I put this character in it will be no small feat to remove him if it turns out now to work at the end of the novel. We’re talking extensive editing to remove the POV entirely and rewrite over 2/3rds of the novel itself to keep things cohesive, not to mention still having to deal with the issue that this would initially have solved anyway. So, any advice on this guys? Perhaps someone with some publishing experience or perhaps who has been effective in multiple POVs could come in and give some insight (Tobias Buckell, hint hint…maybe do a “Ask a Writer” segment?).     Now the second thing that is holding me back from doing too much is only partially related to the first problem. I started to write from Carl’s POV again anyway, figuring that I’m going to write that segment at some point so I might as well get it down. Well, the universe for The Lies of Venicia is actually quite extensive. I’m not expert on stuff, and I’m certainly not dragging in too much science into this story (it’s sort of a horror/political thriller with some adventure/military SF thrown in there). What’s the problem with this? Well, my method of travel for my spaceships is sort of a form of jump drive, but a drive that requires a few things: security codes to activate the drive provided by security checkpoints at the edge of systems, small jumps to nearby systems where security gates are located, and strict enforcement at the security checkpoints. This means that I need to be able to see the systems that I have placed humans in in a 3D spacescape so that I can determine where I can put jump points (or basically the routes that would be deemed acceptable routes for safe travel using the jump drive). I want this to put limitations on space travel. I don’t want characters to be able to jump to any magical place they want to. They have to have clearance by United Earth, a specially designed code that allows the characters to actually activate the jump drive in the first place, and they can’t jump vast distances (astronomically speaking) because it would require too much power and it could very well be dangerous.    But I haven’t a clue how to get a rendering of this. There are programs that allow you to create star systems and the like, but are there programs that allow you to insert real stars and put them all into the proper place? If not, how would I even find out how to place these stars correctly? They have coordinates I’m sure, but I’m not sure how to read them in terms of X, Y, and Z. One thing I thought of doing, if I can figure out how to put things in the proper X, Y, and Z, is to get a large piece of stiff, this foam and label it appropriately. Then I’d use large, different sized pins with large balls on the end or flags to represent the placement of the various stars I’m using. This might be very difficult to manage, but it could prove really interesting because I could also use string to connect stars where legal jumps can be made (I say legal here because one thing I am going to get doing within the story is have one of the characters initiate an unauthorized jump by hacking into a jump drive…such a jump would flag the entire human empire…which might just be what the character wants anyway). This is an idea, but I haven’t a clue how to start. I think a physical, tangible star map would really do wonders for getting everything into perspective. Maybe someone out there has a great idea. If so, speak up!     So that is what is going on with me lately. I am still writing The Lies of Venicia, among various other projects, but it is in a semi-standstill as far as anything major being done to the story. I want to resolve the issues first.

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200 Posts!

Well this is entirely random, but apparently my last post was my 200th post. That’s a LOT of posts. I was thinking about what to do for my 200th post, and alternately for my 10,000th hit, but I wasn’t sure what to do.Some things I thought of doing were the following: Give away a book Post some fiction (perhaps a short story or an excerpt of The Lies of Venicia, which will be discussed later) Or…umm, I don’t know. But maybe since this is my 200th post, and it is really close to my 10,000th hit, you all could think of something you’d want me to do. This is about my readers. So, what do you want? (Don’t click the read more, there isn’t any more after this)

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Some Useful Links…Again

This is a rather irregular feature, but so be it. I find more links than I have time to really blog about individually, so from time to time I’ll clean out my bookmarks by putting links to things I found interesting and wanted to talk about here. So, here goes:Steampunk Laptop from Datamancer! I just discovered this from Brass Goggles and you should all check it out. I want one really bad, even if it doesn’t boot up. This is just wicked cool. A list compiled by Leslie Kay Swigart of science fiction, fantasy, utopian, dystopian, and horror dissertations and theses (not necessarily in that order). A great resource for finding work that other people have written in the field! Publisher Weekly’s Best Books of the Year, which includes some SF & F titles. Alternately here is Amazon’s Best Books of 2007 in the SF & F genres (a list of ten). ManyBooks is an interesting site that might prove useful to those of you out there that don’t mind reading on a screen. I don’t think you can print anything out there, but it’s still free literature, some by well known authors.Judge A Book…By Its Cover. An interesting site that compiles a whole slue of book covers for your perusal.An interesting chart showing the evolution of Indo-European languages. The design is interesting too. A huge list of recommended fantasy authors from SFF.net. It’s REALLY BIG. Just a warning. The Internet Top 100 SF & F list. It’s old (back in 2003), but maybe it holds some relevancy to you guys out there and it will lead you to some works you’ve never heard of before. Want to see your DNA or fingerprint on your wall as art? Well check this site out. I desperately want to get a lighted display of my DNA for my wall. That would be cool. The First Espresso Book Machine. If that name doesn’t say it, then read the article. It’s a bit late, but basically it’s a machine that will actually print out books from a computerized library. In theory it could make buying books from the book store a whole lot different. Can’t find the book you want? Print it out! TangentOnline reviews short speculative fiction works (anthologies, magazines, etc.). They’re currently on hiatus while they update their website, but they’ll be back soon. For those maybe looking for good short fiction to read in SF & F, this is a place to look. The genius of Isaac Asimov on the the idea of ‘intelligence’. This is brilliantly written. Then again, Asimov was an amazing human being and writer. Here are some links for you fantasy writers out there: building magic systems, Tolkien and fantasy (sort of an extensions upon the previous link), Serendipity’s random generators (names, etc.), a Dictionary of Symbolism, a glossary of medieval terms, life in the middle ages, medieval demographics, a huge list discussing prices of medieval items and the like, medieval warfare, medieval names, and The Tome (a.k.a. The History Channel’s site that discusses just about everything to do with medieval times). And, to end this I give you a link to just about the coolest thing to happen in human history next to forming the written word: the Voyager Golden Record. It makes me smile thinking about the creatures who might one day hear that.

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Amazon’s Kindle: Great Invention or Waste of Money?

It’s all over the net here, here, and here, and everywhere else. Amazon has released probably the only e-reader that has the potential to take off. While I am very interested in this product, I can tell you now that I’ll never buy it. We’ll get to that in a minute. Now, the Kindle is a rather remarkable little tool. It’s better than some of the other readers because it looks easier to navigate, is not too complicated, and has a lot of features. I’m not going to get into the details of what it can do. If you want details read the links that I’ve given. If any reader to date has the potential to make e-reading a market-holding fad, it’s the Kindle. But, like Sony’s reader, this too has a high likelihood to flop. Why? Because it’s $399 USD. That’s 193 British Pounds, 270 Euros, or 393 Canadian…err bills (sorry, I don’t know exactly what you guys call it over there). The Kindle is currently only available in the US, but still, that’sone hell of a price. You also have to take into account that the ebooks that you will be buying will cost the same as buying them in paper format. $9.99 US for bestsellers, etc. Another point we’ll be getting to in my reasons why I’m not buying it. However, the good news is that it actually looks very well put together and does seem to have a look that could provide for a decent reading experience. The Amazon folks have gone at this project with the intention of creating a reader that will allow you to get immersed in a book without you realizing that you’re looking at a screen. If they have succeeded in doing this then perhaps this thing will take off, or it will do what the Dreamcast did for online console gaming–spark a wave of new products that do it better. Now to why I’m not going to buy it. First off, it’s $399 USD! Why the hell would I spend that kind of money on something that lets me read books when, like Scalzi pointed out, I can easily buy fifty paper format books for that–or alternately I could buy almost a hundred used books, which I would rather do with that kind of money anyway. That’s absolutely ridiculous to me. For that price you could buy an Xbox 360, or a PS3, or a Nintendo Wii, or even a new computer. That’s a sizable chunk of change if you ask me, especially for something that is only replacing the avenue for reading. How many people read three or four books while sitting in the airport? How hard is it to simply bring a couple books with you or buy one at a kiosk? The next reason I’m not going to buy it is I cannot stand reading novels on the screen. Yes, I do critiques and the like through the computer, but the difference is that critiques don’t involve doing entire novels at one point in time. When I read I like to read a lot. If I get immersed in a paper format book I can end up reading for hours and not realize that so much time has passed. I can’t do that with a screen. My eyes hurt after a little while and I have to walk away. There are a lot of online magazines that I really want to read, but I just can’t bring myself to do it because reading online is just so bothersome. I’m talking fiction. I read blogs and the like on here, but blog posts are generally short and to the point. Stories and novels require attention and thought. Another reason, for me, is a concern about piracy. Perhaps the DRM format that the Kindle is going to use will protect the files, but in all honesty, how long is it going to take for someone to figure out how to get around that? A week? Maybe two? I fear for the authors who find that their work is being cast out into the abyss we call the net to be scooped up like a blockbuster movie. Authors don’t get a lot of money for their work in the first place–at least new authors or ones that aren’t bestsellers like Stephen King don’t get a lot–and to lose funds because someone has pirated the hell out of a work would really suck. I realize that you shouldn’t write to be rich, but what if someone depends on their royalties for survive? In the end, I just can’t bring myself to spend that kind of money on this product. I’d rather hold a real book in my hands anyway. I’m old fashioned I suppose. Does anyone else have thoughts on this product?

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The Future of SF?

    I recently found this link over at the lovely SF Signal. It’s an article in the Guardian by Brian Aldiss that discusses where the future of SF is. The article is called “Our Science Fiction Fate” with a caption that reads “The planet’s dire state makes the imaginative leaps of dystopian SF writers redundant”. First off, I don’t know if Aldiss is proposing that Al Gore is correct on his assertions that we, human beings, are screwing up our planet and it’s our fault that things are changing, or that the climate is changing, but the means by which this is happening are up for interpretation. He does posit that there are too many of us here, which is very true. Things are changing on this planet. People like Gore, who may think they are doing something for the betterment of mankind, are the wrong sorts of people to tell us about climate change. Why? Because when we first started listening to people who are hypocrites, we ended up with the skewed and failing governmental system we have today. Regardless, there are changes on this planet and it is ignorant for any of us–being humans–to assume that we know what the hell is going on. We know nothing. None of us have lived through a warming period and our history is nothing but a blip on the Earthen screen. The evidence that is constantly presented is skewed.    First it was those saying nothing was happening at all. These were the same people who took all the evidence that supported their argument and ignored anything that suggested otherwise. Then things changed, and we ended up with these Global Warming enthusiasts, people that don’t really know anything about the state of the planet, but ignorantly assume that everything told to them in the 100% truth. The sad thing is that the same narrow minded, oppressive view that their predicessors had is present here in these new world thinkers. There is a lot of evidence to show that the planet is changing, and some evidence to suggest that it has something to do with humans, but in the wake of that is a mountain of evidence that suggests that humans have little influence on the direction of the planet. This evidence is ignored. People assume that it is conservative propaganda when really it is evidence provided by a group of very well minded scientists that are more concerned for the well being of our planet than the Global Warming enthusiasts are. Why? Because they have taken into account that radically changing worldwide policies will have adverse effects on everyone. Wouldn’t you want to be 100% sure before making changes? Imagine this is making the decision to shoot someone because they are evil. If your evidence is 50% that he is evil and 50% that he’s not, would you feel okay shooting him anyway? I fully understand the logic that change needs to occur and I am in no way proposing that we don’t make societal changes. Inevitably we have to make changes because oil is growing thin and we need sources that can easily be replicated and will not disappear. But I also understand that if we’re wrong and we make radical decisions, we could inadvertently destroy millions of lives and have to live with that on our consciences when the truth comes to the front.    Now, Aldiss, it seems, is making the argument that science fiction writers have a problem with addressing what he calls ‘global threats’–Global Warming probably being the main thing to consider here–and with recycling ideas.    To the first point:    I cannot say that I agree with this, but only because I’m not overly familiar with any SF being written that addresses global catastrophes that we believe are around the corner. Certainly movies like The Core and The Day After Tomorrow–one that I refuse to see and one that I thought was rather entertaining–are examples of science fiction in the film industry. I can’t imagine that nobody is writing about Global Warming though. Perhaps what is happening isn’t that people aren’t writing about it, but that people who wouldn’t be considered SF writers are putting out books that are labeled as mainstream rather than SF. If that’s the case, then it’s no wonder we’re not hearing much about it in the SF world. I’ve seen some books that weren’t labeled SF about global catastrophe. So it seems that books on this subject exist, but perhaps not in the frequency that Aldiss would like, or at least not in the manner that Aldiss would agree is definitively SF.    The second point:    How does one avoid redundancy in any type of fiction, not just SF? When we look at fantasy, for example, there is a great tendency to be redundant because people constantly repeat the same basic things over and over. What makes it good is the writers. Someone can take a story about elves and make it really fascinating. Alternately, someone can write a story about traveling to Mars and do the same. But the argument seems directed towards dystopian redundancies–what I call commonalities. This is very true that dystopian ideals are repeated ad naseum. But this is the nature of SF. Our future seems very bleak, for good reason. Aldiss even points them out–the cold war, nuclear war, etc. When we look at it, we are constantly devising new ways to destroy ourselves, our governments are corrupt and manipulative, wars are being waged that shouldn’t, wars are dehumanized for those with technology, etc. We live in a world that is dystopian, as Aldiss has pointed out. Does this make for redundant SF though? I can’t say that it does, at least not in any different sense than the fact that fantasy is redundant too. The fact is that it’s human. SF simply addresses it a lot. There are still wonderful stories being told with gloriously fascinating futures intermixed.    Another question that should be asked is whether people are even interested in other forms of SF.

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